The process of writing and expanding my title 





My very first plan 

I first decided to look through several periods of time where I could find key themes of hope.. I narrowed it down to 3 different periods - the fall of the Berlin wall in 1989,  the civil rights march on Washington in 1963 and the liberation of Auschwitz. I settled on writing a plan for the fall of Berlin Wall. 

First I asked myself how is hope shown? 

In November 1989 after years of peaceful protests and growing pressure thousands of East Germans flooded the Wall checkpoints showing a symbol of human resilience and unity and most of all hope for a better future 

My first plan: 

  •  short story? 
  • screenplay?
  • script? 

I chose to do a script from multiple perspectives with a key theme of direct address, I saw this really nicely in the play that I am doing in my lamda lessons called "things I know to be true". I wanted to show different perspectives of those involved in the event. 

The websites I used to research my title:

  1.  Mythology & Folklore Stack Exchange
  2. Fall of Berlin Wall: How 1989 reshaped the modern world (BBC)
  3.  Merriam Webster - Pandora's box definition and meaning
  4. The idioms - Pandora's meaning and origin  

My process of refining my title

While the fall of the Berlin wall was a great moment in history and truly encompassed hope and freedom around 3 days into the project I was researching how hope effected people during this time I came across a post questioning how hope remained in Pandora's box even though there is still hope in the world and I grew increasingly fascinated in this. I carried on planning for the Berlin Wall short play that I was still intending to write but then decided to encompass a bit of this myth into the original plan. Soon, I had drifted away from the idea of the fall of the Berlin wall and started researching the story and found some really interesting and different versions. I felt like it was important however to add to this page my first planning stages as the Berlin Wall heavily influenced how I ended my story as I wanted to include real world experiences to resonate with those reading the story. 

My process of writing 

My second Plan

As I had already planned to do a short play I used similar formatting in planning and I had some very rough ideas about what I wanted: 

Ideas:

  • Short story
  • Screenplay
  • Script
  • Pandora's box

Ideas for pandora box:

  • 3 scenes?
  • Pandora monologue (Barbie kind of vibe?)
  • 7 deadly sins released
  • Backstory
  • Connection between Eve and Pandora
  • Hope key theme so like maybe duo convo between hope and Pandora
  • Male heavy sins?
  • Stereotypes
  • The bad things about the Gods
  • Creation of Pandora
  • The creation of animals
  • Somehow link between animals and humans e.g. Zeus talks about giving the birds wings, fish scales
  • Hope= childhood innocence
  • Curiosity come from the Goddesses in so many versions
  • Athena maybe mention Medusa
  • Sexism in Ancient Greece
  • Different types of love can be seen – one sided love Hera and Zeus, forced love Pandora Epimetheus

Scene 1:

  • Zeus' introduction acts as a narrator
  • Talks about Prometheus stealing fire and giving it to humans
  • Flaws of humans
  • The gifts given to other animals
  • Creation of Pandora

Scene 2:

  • Pandora marriage to Epimetheus (could this be a whole monologue) hardship of women
  • Curiosity of Pandora
  • Opening of the box
  • Deadly sins released to the world

Scene 3

  • Hope concluding the play talking about how the world's innocence/ trust/ beauty has been destroyed perhaps pandora can be turned ugly and old but end with hope may remain

Characteristics

Zeus: Physical = male, late 40's to 50's in appearance, hardened face, tall and large, beard, stress lines, muscular, blue eyes Emotional = hard hearted, non-empathetic, angry, emotionless, hateful, narcistic

Hera: Physical: late 30's to early 40's, pretty but plain compared to others, walks with an air of superiority, royal like, curled hair falling without any knot, everything too perfect she doesn't look real. Emotional: cold, angry, heartbroken, lonely, fragile, on the edge of a meltdown

Prometheus: physical= young age, early 20's, quite short, plain looking, no beard, innocence, looks aged at the end of the show, permanent stoop at end. Emotional: stupid, reckless, like a puppy

Pandora: Physical= most beautiful in show, bright eyes, curly hair, small and delicate, mischievous smile. Emotional= appears to be more innocent than she is, curiosity, innocent but also not in a weird way

Hope: physical= ethereal like, girl/boy represents everyone, not pretty but not ugly, not big but not small, somehow everything all at once emotional: doesn't really have emotion but has a hopeful lift in voice

Epimetheus = physical: handsome but easily overshadowed by pandora, taller than his brother, teenage years emotions: fool-hardy, not clever, reckless

Deadly sins: 7 men in dark clothes, hood over faces, walking in unison, limping pain

Play consists of 13 characters, 10 men, 2 women, 1 either

To gender heavy? Perhaps change the seven deadly sins with either?

Play consists of 13 characters: 8 either, 3 men, 2 women


My third and final plan

The evolution between writing styles

I realized that the story of Pandora's box was probably a lot bigger and more complicated then I first imagined so I decided I was going to tweak some things while still having that main themes of hope and mythology. As the word limit was a lot smaller then I was planning I decided to shift my focus from 3 scenes to a short story that had a flash forward to different times in history that i had previously wrote down. 

Ideas: 

  • Poems - they could be a big part of the story as the berlin wall and also the different sins 
  • Could I include a physical pandora's box?
  • Do i want to have first person? second person? or even free indirect discourse which I have been learning more about in my English lessons while reading Pride and prejudice?  

I finally settled on doing a short story which hopefully would encompass all the requirements and ideas I had wrote down. By now I was deep into the Easter holidays and was starting to panic as I had basically changed my mind and adapted the story quite a few times so I wrote my first draft relatively quickly which can be seen as there are quite a few errors and things I believed needed to be clearer.... 

This is my first draft:  

 Planning 

Actual Planning 

As you can see I had a lot of ideas but no concrete planning so I devoted about half a day to planning and researching and just all together cleaning up my notes...

Planning 

Once again when I sat down to plan this I came up with a hectic and unorganized notes that were so chaotic so I decided to order these notes and try to get my head around a CLEAR plan and this is what I came up with: 

  • beginning with they symbolism of fire and how Prometheus gave humans who were made out of clay purpose 
  • the creation of pandora and the gifts given to her from all the Gods 
  • The curiosity of Pandora
  • Pandora being the first "flawed" human 
  • Pandora's gifts are more of a curse
  • War being a huge theme - perspective of a World War 1 soldier


First draft

Pandora's hope 


The age of man brought pain and anguish. The Gods watched and waited; observed as the world fell into ruin and hatred. One man stood alone on the edge of a cliff watching as the world he loved was destroyed and as he took his last breath one word escaped him. The one word that had changed them all.

"Pandora"

Before the rulings of Kings, the Gods reigned above, lounging in luxury and gold as they watched humans walk around in peace. Yet this serenity was warped and cruel, they spent endless days in the dark not a thought, not a laugh and not even a tear. They were nothing.

That is until Prometheus stole the fire.

For years he had pleaded with the Gods begged them to have compassion, his love for the humans were outmatched and in his desperate attempt to give them the power of thought; the power of hope, he had defied the Gods.

Zeus' anger was unmatched he roared above the clouds.

"Let them freeze," he bellowed in Prometheus' face. "They are nothing but clay and darkness."

"But they could be more."

That sentence condemned not only Prometheus but all of humankind. Zeus gave a bellowing laugh, one so cold and cruel that even Prometheus' blazing fire began to dim.

"Fine," the King of Gods pronounced. "I shall give them a gift more beautiful than anything in this world. Beautiful yet terrible enough to ruin mankind."

He began to create his beautiful curse.

Summoning Hephaestus, he commanded him to forge a woman from the most beautiful of clays- skin so smooth the sun reflected off it, lips so red they were like blood and eyes so bright like fire.

Aphrodite gave her immense beauty; Hermes charm and Athena cloaked her in gold and silver.

But then with all the vengeance and hatred Zeus could offer he gave her curiosity. And so, Pandora was created, "all-gifted" yet "all-cursed".

She was perfection.

Prometheus knew of the horrors Zeus could bestow on him and so warned his brother to not accept the gifts that Zeus would offer.

"He does not give. He takes."

However, Epimetheus was slow and vain, he looked upon Pandora's beauty and ignored every desperate warning coming out his brother's mouth.

He would betray humanity for her love.

And he did.

Pandora was so full of life her eyes glistened when she thought of every animal and human on this earth. She was so full of wonder and hope she could not imagine ever suffering. Yet even though she was so happy her mind was curious, and she had a hunger for knowledge like no other.

"Why is the sky blue?"

"Who created the Gods?"

"Where does the sun go at night?"

And most often:

"Why was I made?"

Epimetheus would brush off her questions just content to hear her voice but what he did not know was that she was not only the gift Zeus had bestowed upon his household. Hermes had given her a beautiful box with ornate etchings of gold and string made from clouds.

But this gift came with a catch.

Never to be opened.

At first this came easily to her. Why should she open it? But curiosity wove away at her, she pulled out half of her hair, her once pristine face was covered in deep lines and every day, every night it called to her, begging to be opened.

And so, she did.

She broke the lid.

The world screamed, out poured pain and shadow.

She was drowning in fear – sorrow slashed at her once perfect face, hate hammered into her skull, famine tore at her with sharp teeth, war clawed at her lips and they bled the sorrows of human, lies snaked around her like millions of serpents, betrayal battered her around the room, and she begged and begged and begged Zeus for help.

And he laughed.

His laughter filled the air as millions of humans were tortured, killed and abused.

And he laughed.

And laughed.

And laughed.

Until the box was nearly empty.

A soft glow cut through the never-ending darkness.

Hope.

She laughed through tears. Hope had saved her – saved them all.

Small.

Beautiful.

The saviour.

Its voice cut through the darkness as soft as a child.

"I am hope."

And pandora wept.

And wept.

And wept.

Hope didn't save those who pain had hurt.

Wars still killed, lies still shattered lives, famine still took the bravest.

But she still followed all this heartbreak. The little voice in the back of their heads.

Hope was never meant to destroy the pain.

It was not meant to save the world.

It was meant to outlast the heartbreak.

Outlast the pain.

Outlast the lives.

Outlast Zeus and those just like him.

Hope was meant to empower.

And that is what she did.

Centuries later a man kneeled on the ground, hands shaking, tears streaming down his face. He hears screams, gunshots and then silence. He is afraid. The sky is darker. The world he knew is gone. He closes his eyes.

The war carries on.

His world stops.

Yet he cannot.

He stands up.

Picks up his fallen comrade's gun and walks on.

He whispers, "There's still hope."

The village she lived in was crumbling around her. She longed for food and water. She longed to see her family again. She longed for the sky to rain again. She prayed and prayed to every God watching down.

She lit a candle and prayed.

Yet no miracle came.

She stands up and walks out.

Out into the streets.

Out into the pain.

Then through the midst of all the grieving bodies a voice ring out.

A young boy with a guitar. Singing.

"For the hope of it all." He sang repeatedly. And she felt free.

The small girl stood watching. Watching as her father was pulled to the other side. Watching as her mother cried her name. She watched as they were taken to a better future while she was left behind. She heard her brother's voice.

"One day," he muttered. Then suddenly his voice lifted above the crying and protests "One day! One day this wall will fall. There is hope and hope does not give up. No matter how hard we try, we never lose faith. We must be brave enough to fight it. Tonight is not a night for pain or suffering it is a night for freedom and hop-"

She watched as the light left his body.

She ran.

And ran.

And ran.

And ran.

She didn't cry.

She didn't scream.

She just kept running.

Running towards something knew.

Running for those who can no longer run.

Running for joy.

Running for compassion.

Running for integrity.

Running for curiosity.

Running for generosity.

Running for courage.

Running for the soldier.

Running for the hunger-stricken girl.

Running for her brother.

Running for Pandora.

Running for fire.

Running and running.

Always running for hope.

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